“Reflection” a Sestina (inspired by Caddo Veil)

I stand and gaze upon my unfamiliar face

I find it hard to look into my eyes

And view a distance that transcends the skies

I miss the panorama of the stars

And long to see the light within them glow

I will settle even for a glimmer

 

For even cooling embers give a glimmer

Though sadness etches time across the face

Oh how I miss that lovely glow

That once emanated from those eyes

The light of a million stars

Can never again light up these skies
Would that I could fly to those skies

And capture in a bottle all that glimmer

Once flashing from those dying stars

To look into this face

Into those eyes

Oh how they once did glow
Like candles glow

Like summer skies

Those flashing eyes

That glittering glimmer

The youthful face

And golden stars
I’d love to skip and dance among the stars

Swallow moonbeams and glow

And then how radiant my face

Would shine my light into the endless skies

What a glimmer

In those eyes
Those darkened eyes

Which see no stars

Which sense no glimmer

No more do they glow

Just empty skies

A sullen face

When did the light depart from those eyes which for so long did warmly glow?

When did the darkness overtake the stars which once did sparkle as diamonds in the skies?

What would I give to once more see that glimmer when I gaze into this face.

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Caddo Veil is a wonderful poet who blogs here at wordpress and I was inspired by her writing, to attempt this poetry challenge.  A sestina is a rather complex and structured poem whereas most of what I do is fairly free-flowing.  In this case, unlike all my other poems on this blog, the sentiments expressed did not flow from the mindset I was in at the time I wrote it, but rather it was an exercise in playing with pre-selected words as one might play at arts and crafts.

2 thoughts on ““Reflection” a Sestina (inspired by Caddo Veil)

  1. Oh my goodness, oh my goodness!!! Bravo, sweet girl! I was planning to attempt a sestina, but now I’m not so sure. This is so lovely, but sad too–if it’s a true reflection, and not a work of fiction. But even if it’s true, you have blessed and cheered my day abundantly–I can’t believe this! You’ve done a wonderful job–such greatness–thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing this with all of us! Will send up prayers for you~~much love, sis Caddo

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    • Most of my writing does spring from my emotion of the moment in which I write, however, not so in this case. Though some sentiments do touch on fleeting feelings of my past, this particular poem was an exercise in stretching my wings and the pure enjoyment of playing with words like one might play at arts and crafts. I definitely see why you love it so much and I look forward to exploring some more. Doesn’t hold a candle to your work, Sis Caddo!

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